BMW- Sheer Driving Pleasure

Sheer driving pleasure

Our car comes in all colors

Modern and real sleek

Delicious apples

Red, green, yellow  are  the best

Apples  are  the  best

Boring  Sentence:  The butterfly flew above the flowers.

My new sentence: The spotted butterfly drank sticky nectar from purple, blue, and red flowers.

Boring Sentence: The  girl  got  popcorn  at  the  movies.

My new elaborated sentence: The hungry girl  got  buttery  popcorn  for  the  entertaining movie.

Boring Sentence: The  detective  found  clues  to  solve  the  mystery.

My New Sentence: The nice  detective slowly  found  clues  to  solve  the  mystery.