Monthly Archives: September 2016

Literary Response

Here’s are some examples on how Melody changes in Sharon Draper’s book ‘’Out Of My Mind’’.
One change for a start is that Melody goes to school. She was like a boss of school.She was emphatically without a doubt. She was a good student.’’ I have been at Spaulding Street Elementary school for five years’’. Another change that happened is she got a adorable little puppy.’’ A puppy! A golden retriever puppy. She extremely filled with joy.’’ Here’s another change that happened in the story is that she got a very smart computer that helps her talk.’’ Hi everybody I have a new computer. And that’s all of the examples on Sharon Draper’s book ‘’ Out Of My Mind’’.

Sharon Draper’s Writing

Here’s what I like about Sharon Draper’s book. I like that the author creates a main character that is relatable. Draper does this in the quote “I actually sort of surprised me that I couldn’t do stuff and it made me angry. Another thing I like is that the author is very descriptive. Draper does this in the quote “I slide out of that wheelchair like a piece of wet spaghetti.”I also like the book because it imagery. It shows this in the quote,”The tornado took over.My arms became fighting sticks, my legs became weapons. “Here’s what I love about Sharon Draper’s book ” Out of My Mind.”